Narrative Writing (Literacy)

 Friday 4 September 

This is my Narrative Writing so far. I haven't finished yet because I forgot to do this for home learning. I will update my writing when I do Narrative Writing. 

We had to do a Narrative Writing based on the photos we picked and as you can see, I have picked a spider with a cat face. 

“I aM tHe MoSt eViLeSt aNd PoWeRfUl CreAtuRe ThEre iS!!!”

Spat yelled proudly after destroying a high-school end-of-year prom by spider-webbing people just scaring them by how he looks. 

“EEEEHHHHH, WRRONNNGGG!!!!, TRY AGAIN!!!” Slappy the Dummy screeched 

“Well Well Well, look who the the cat dragged in, literally HAHAHAHAHAHA” Spat joking because Slappy 

“You made it to the one and only Canyon Crest Academy in California!

Narrative Writing

Thursday 30 July

This is my first draft of my Narrative Writing.

First thing we had to do was pick a picture that we were interested in and write a Narrative Writing based on the picture. It's unfinished because I had an idea for the problem but I didn't know how to solve it and I was still figuring it out. I am going make it better by thinking what makes a good Narrative Writing and how can I get my readers hooked into my writing.

Lost at Sea

“RaChEl!!!, baby where are you!” Michael yelled to look for her daughter who is currently drowning in the deep, rocky blue ocean, “DAD!!! DAd!!!” as Rachel tried to reach for air to call for help. 

Narrative Writing

Wednesday 7 August 

Kate glanced across at Jessica and noticed that she was nervous too. The guides had checked everyone’s equipment thoroughly and now the group was about to abseil down a sheer rock face into the eerie, unknown depth of a cave.

When the group of people entered, Jessica looked around and saw that there was 1 of the guides in the front and 2 guides at the back of everyone and was less nervous, “It’s pitch black  in here, I’m going to turn on my torch” one of the boys said nervously, then everyone started to turn on their torch. “Oh, shoot I forgot my one, can you share with me Kate” Jessica asked “Sure” Kate replied.

“Wow the walls are so shiny” Jake whispered “Eww, I think something just got in my mouth when I was yawning” Kate said, Kate looked up to see what fell in her mouth but it was only dirt. 

“Again, dirt just got in my mouth” Kate complained “Watch out there is a massive rock on your right” the guider in the front warned. Then Kate look up but she didn’t hear the guider, then as Jessica pointed her torch to her left to see what was touching her, BOOM!!! Kate hit her ankle on the corner of the massive rock. “OUCHH, my ankle” Kate screamed miserably. 

“AHHH, it hurts so bad” shrieked Kate “Don’t worry, you’re going to be okay” said Shawn calmly. “Here you go, an ice pack, cold like Antarctica, put this on your ankle” Shawn said “Wow, your ankle is as red as a tomato” Jake noticed. “Come on, let’s get out of this eerie cave!!!” Jessica shouted.

They all went out , Kate was still hurt badly but in the end everyone was safe. 

What a trip!

Narrative Writing

Thursday 1 August

I am learning to write a narrative story and use similes, metaphors and
personifications.
Prompt:

My mums mirror

“Are you sure he’s alright” asked Maya mysteriously “

He’s been like that ever since Saturday, when his mum died in the fire,” Riley answered.
“Hey Callum, are you alright? you’ve been staring at the water for 15 minutes” Maya asked him. 

“Your mother was as beautiful as a rose , she wouldn’t want you to be sad” Riley cried ,
“Thanks, I come here every day , my mum loved this beach. 
She would always come and wave her long shiny dark black hair reflecting onto the water as if it were
her own mirror” “When I look at this “mirror” I see her flipping her hair around ,smiling ,
this is my favourite beach now.  The water is my mum's very own mirror” Callum wiped his tears and
walked away. 

I sat beside him quietly and we sat for a long while.
Callum came to his sense and we left the beach holding each other’s hands. 
It was comforting and sad at the same time.

My Dream Holiday

A Vacation to Bora Bora

One sunny morning, I was in the beautiful Bora Bora. When I woke up my mother and I was hungry so we ordered room service. For my breakfast I had 2 waffles and 1 pancake with whipped cream and syrup on top.

After that it was so boring so I decided to play fortnite with Alfred and Etuale It was a blast playing with them because we were on the top 10 and we also came first. It was also a blast because we were showing each other the electric shuffle, the shoot, fresh, best mates, groove jam and popcorn.

When it was 12:30 I asked my mother if I could go swimming and she said “Knock yourself out”

When I hopped in the beach with my goggles and then I saw turtles, starfish, fishs and stingrays. I was scared of the stingray because I thought that it would sting me.

I went to the turtle and when I felt the turtle’s back it felt like a weird pattern sticking out. When i went to go have a rest on the sand, the sand was oozing through my wet toes. I stepped on a shell and that gave me an idea.

After that I was collecting 10 shells and I was throwing the shells at the sea to make it go up and down up and down. Then I was getting hungry so I told my mum who was resting and then she said “We will both get lunch because I am feeling a bit hungry too” but in Tongan.

When my mum and I was eating it was 2:40, for my lunch I had 2 healthy sandwiches and 2 finger fish and a cup of juice. After I had my lunch it was going dark and the time was 7:20, then I went sleep because I was so tired that I could sleep all day. That was a memory that I never erase.