Your blog was amazing. It had lots of facts in it. I also liked the way you presented it. I didn't know that eel die after giving birth.
It would have been better if you had add some more photos. Also next time try changing the font to something else. By the way do you have any creatures that that needs to be cold at all time?
Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added a picture to show what was important and other things to describe it.
Did you think about putting the writing at the top, because I do it all the time.
Next time, you could write a DLO and at the end you could add a gif to say goodbye or thanks for watching or something like that.
Regards, Zahrah!
Hello Dianne,
ReplyDeleteI am Albin from YMS.
Your blog was amazing. It had lots of facts in it. I also liked the way you presented it. I didn't know that eel die after giving birth.
It would have been better if you had add some more photos. Also next time try changing the font to something else. By the way do you have any creatures that that needs to be cold at all time?
Kind regards
Albin.