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Tuesday 17 December 2019

Summer Learning Journey Week 1 Day 2

Tuesday 17 December
Week 1
Day 2: Up in the Air
Activity 1: Flying Solo
Activity 2:
I have chosen to do a Haiku, Haiku is a Japanese poem of 17 syllables altogether, in three lines of 5,7, then 5 again. 

Wow!, this is awesome
Flying so high in the sky 
The stars are so bright

Activity 3:
I know that Nail Armstrong and those other people that went with him is very brave because knowing that people have died trying to get to the moon is very scary and they still wanted to try it. I feel like it was very brave and cool of them to walk on the moon because I have never heard or seen anyone tried to walk on the moon and succeeded. 

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13 comments:

  1. Heather Collins17 December 2019 at 16:05

    Hi Dianne this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the venn diagram you have created about two awesome aviators - do you want to be a pilot when you leave school, or maybe a flight engineer? I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!

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    1. Anonymous17 December 2019 at 16:14

      Hi Heather,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog, good to know you will be commenting on our blogs!, I would not be a pilot when I leave school because there will be lots of responsibilities that I would have to handle and plus I get carsick and I do not enjoy that so I would probably get airsick.

      I would like to walk on the moon but I will also not enjoy the journey there, but what food can we eat? Is there a special kind?.

      I will keep blogging and commenting on others,
      Thanks again!

      Ka Kite,
      Dianne

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  2. Anonymous17 December 2019 at 20:17

    Hi Dianne.
    It's Lukas. I really enjoyed reading your activities they were so intresting, I also enjoyed your poem. But for the first activity I couldn't properly read it. Next time use images to make it look more intresting.
    But other than that keep up the good work!

    Kind Regards
    Lukas

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    1. Anonymous18 December 2019 at 19:55

      Hi Lukas,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog again and I am glad that you are enjoying my posts. I am also glad that you enjoyed my poem, thanks for the tips, I definitely will use them.

      You also keep up the good work!

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  3. Anonymous17 December 2019 at 20:24

    Malo e Lelei Dianne,
    It is great to see you Blogging especially finishing Day 2! Please make sure to re-read your writing because you don't make sense in a few sentences. Hopefully you learnt something from this comment.
    Good luck for the rest of your blogging!

    Laki

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    1. Anonymous18 December 2019 at 19:58

      Malo e Lelei Dianne,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog again and I have definitely learned something from your comment.

      Good luck for the rest of your blogging also!

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  4. Anonymous17 December 2019 at 21:35

    Hey Dianne,
    Its me Christopher.
    I really enjoy reading your posts because you have a lot of detail in each activity.

    Also in the first activity I couldn't read it properly, probably next time you should make it bigger.
    Also has anyone did something brave to save you? or have you did something brave to help someone?

    Besides that your doing great!

    Good night!

    Malo Aupito
    Christopher

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    1. Anonymous18 December 2019 at 20:03

      Hello Christopher,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog again and I'm glad you are enjoying my blog posts, I try my best to add detail.

      Thank you for the tip, I will definitely use it. I have stood up for someone that has been bullying someone close to me.

      You are doing great also!,
      Thanks

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  5. Anonymous21 December 2019 at 05:22

    Hey Dianne,
    I really enjoy reading the posts that you have made,for activity one, it has a lot of good information that informs you what have the two flyers done, great work.

    Good job
    Jerome

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    1. Anonymous22 December 2019 at 19:26

      Hey Jerome!,
      I am glad that you have enjoyed reading my posts and I try my best to have great information.

      Thank you for commenting on my blog,
      Great job to you too!

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  7. Anonymous28 December 2019 at 15:41

    Hey Dianne,
    For activity 2, I enjoyed reading your haiku, I think you were very creative for doing a haiku. I don't think much people thought of doing that. Great work.

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  8. Anonymous28 December 2019 at 15:45

    Hey Dianne,
    For activity 3, I think Nail Armstrong was very brave as well, because it would've been very scary travelling to the moon. He must've been really nervous or scared. Great work.

    Great work
    Jerome

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