Narrative Writing

Thursday 30 July

This is my first draft of my Narrative Writing.

First thing we had to do was pick a picture that we were interested in and write a Narrative Writing based on the picture. It's unfinished because I had an idea for the problem but I didn't know how to solve it and I was still figuring it out. I am going make it better by thinking what makes a good Narrative Writing and how can I get my readers hooked into my writing.

Lost at Sea

“RaChEl!!!, baby where are you!” Michael yelled to look for her daughter who is currently drowning in the deep, rocky blue ocean, “DAD!!! DAd!!!” as Rachel tried to reach for air to call for help.